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Definitely not Trance

This is Industrial, and it's not even that good of a song. It's terribly mastered, and the melodies aren't all that great.

You have a lot to work on. Also, know what you're making before you submit it in the wrong place.


{DJ-HLS}

Dear god...

That piano intro was completely and totally godly, but then you destroyed the song with the second half, because, I'm not gonna lie, it wasn't that good.

But the piano part was absolutely amazing. I thought I had died and gone to heaven when I heard that. You should definitely do a song like this except don't use a regular synth for a lead, use a piano. Actually, I think I'll do that...

Overall, I only really liked the piano intro. You should really work on your choice of synths. Seeing as this is a soft and sad song, you should have chosen a soft supersaw for a main lead, and a softer kick, along with softer synths all over. Again, nice piano work though.


{DJ-HLS}

Champius responds:

hah yeah i just kinda mashed the two together....i didnt really put much thought into that then....

I do know what you mean though

anyway thanks a lot for taking the ime to review!

Wow. Reviewing as the song goes along.

Before I start my review, I'd just like to let you know that this should be in House, and not Trance.

Well to start off, I love the synths. That bass you have going there starting at :29 is really epic, and it's pretty freaking cool. The intro is pretty good, but I don't like that one shot bass you have.

Wow. It looks like you took a break from the epic melodies and went chill, cause this is is a really laid back song so far.

Ohmyjesus, I love the stuttering vocals, they fit absolutely perfectly. This song is so chill it's amazing.

Overall, this song is extremely laid back, and I loved almost all of the synths. The only thing I didn't really like was the one shot bass that starts at the very beginning of the song and goes the whole way throughout.

You are very good at this, dude. You need to get noticed.


{DJ-HLS}

DjZeaklous responds:

Should I make this longer? Thanks for the review, rating, and support!

Pretty good

Pretty freaking great for your first Trance song. I just didn't like your transitions very much.

You have to have had some prior training to making this song, because I don't think you coulda done something like this in one shot, never before having made something similar to it. Then again, if you had, you might just become better than Tiesto in about a year's time.

Overall, I liked the melodies a lot, but the one melody was a little too repetitive, and the transitions were too abrupt. Try working on that a bit, and your next Trance song will probably be 110% better.


{DJ-HLS}

Hahaha.

Very very nice. Nothing really to say. Like the melody.


{DJ-HLS}

Woot!!!

Love it and the synth. Hahaha, I also love how you played the Sound of Goodbye melo. I could recognize that from a mile away... if I could hear it.

Basshunter too, nice.

And I disagree with the guy under me. I can tell the transitions.

Nice job dude.


{DJ-HLS}

Epic much.

Nice reese you got goin there. You use Hotel Sinus? Kinda sounds like it. Anyways, pretty freakin epic song you got goin here. Very nice job.


{DJ-HLS}

Mrmilkcarton responds:

Never heard of Hotel Sinus.

Godly song dude.

There's way too much stuff to compliment you on, so I'll just put down what pops into my head. I love the buildup that first introduces the acapella. I don't even know how to say how great it was.

The new melody is amazing, and fits perfectly. This song almost has an out of world feeling, as does much of your work.

Great leads, and kick, and pad, and EQing of the acapella, and everything.

I can only aspire to be as good as you. This is some of the best trance I've ever heard.


{DJ-HLS}

Kazmo responds:

LoL, compliments are nice! :P

Strive man, I know you yourself are talented, just keep at it man, experiment, practice, and never give up! :D

My words of wisdomz lol

Thanks for the review and great support!!

Amazing song.

I love this. I can't wait for the finished version. I'm not quite sure if the name completely fits it, but it sorta does so you're good :D The melody is complete epicness, and not repetitive at all. Great job with it, I don't think I could ever come up with a melody that good.

BeatSource down there said that he thinks the kick isn't solid enough, well I disagree :P. I think the kick fits perfectly for the type of Trance sound you're going for, and you completely achieved it.

I can definitely see you going pro, Kazmo. You are just absolutely amazing at this. You are a hell of a lot better than some of the Trance artists I've heard lately.

One more thing before I close out this review, when this is finished I am DEFINITELY remixing it.

OK maybe two more things... you should check out some of my new stuff and maybe drop a review if you've got the time :)


{DJ-HLS}

Kazmo responds:

Ya I updated it since he reviewed :3

Glad you love it, and I look forward to your remix of it!

I'll let you know when it's done! :D

Thanks!!!

Quite AWESOME!!

This was an awesome song. I really really liked it along with the really smooth supersaw you had in there and pretty much everything.

Holy shit I love that arp that comes in at 1:27. Very awesome.

The one and only thing I didn't like about this song is the fact that you didn't master it DX. It really could have used a good mastering.

So far, this is your best song that I've heard, but I still have yet to listen to the other new one. Nice piano work btw. Scratch that, amazing piano work.

Overall, this was a great song, but it should have been mastered. Woah wait a second... THERE'S NO REAL ENDING?!?!?! WHAT'S UP WITH THAT?!?!?!?!?

OK, I'm docking another point for that. I docked the 2 points for no mastering and no ending. You should should do those.

Overall it was a nice song, but it should have been mastered and actually HAD AN ENDING.


{DJ-HLS}

Prodigal responds:

I see you forgot to Dock those points, I'll just say you gave an 8 :P

Thanks for the critisism, I agree upon the mastering, there was NOTHING done with mastering, I only EQed it xD No ending? I kinda agree, Although I would pursue that end as an ending, however you may think how you like.

No full reply, Gotta go check your new songs :P

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