Blegh.
The key changes don't work in this song. They just don't go together. I don't like the melodies because of that. They just don't go together. If you fix the chord progression it will be much better.
And this is pure Techno right here, not Trance.
This could turn into a pretty cool song if you fix that chord progression.
{DJ-HLS}
Many corrections need to be done.
And it's not Trance. So many people have been putting Dance music under the Trance genre lately.
Anyways, the leads and synths are distorting WAY too much, they are too loud. I don't like that Hypersaw, you should change it to a Supersaw, and you should really fix all of the distortion. The kick is also too loud and is distorting everything. You could also use a better clap.
Lots of work done, and genre correction, but I think this could turn into a pretty cool song.
{DJ-HLS}
K. Anyways its not hypersaw or a saw at all. Thanks for the suggestions though.
Nice song but...
It's not Trance, so that's why I docked a point. This is Dance, and I see you've been mistaking a lot of your Dance for Trance lately, as in thinking that Dance music is Trance music.
Anyways to the song. This is classic XenoxX style. I love the pad in the beginning, and you shoulda cept it in the song the whole time. I also like how you brought in the lead, that was pretty cool. Nice piano work as usual.
I don't like the choruses though. They are too empty. They need to have more in them other than just a lead, bass, kick and clap. Too simple. I docked another point for that.
You should work on filling your songs more, and putting them in the right genre XD.
{DJ-HLS}
Repetitive
But I liked the first 2 patterns at the beginning. Another way to put is that I liked the song up to :24, after that it got overbearingly repetitive.
I did like the piano though. Not a bad job.
{DJ-HLS}
Too repetitive.
Really fuckin cool at the beginning and for the first "verse", but then it got old and boring. If you had changed it up more and done a different beat with the kicks, it woulda been much better.
Considering your time schedule, I still think you coulda changed up the kick pattern.
Pretty cool song though, I'm not gonna lie.
{DJ-HLS}
I wish I could buy this...
CAUSE I'D LOVE TO!!! But right now I'm saving up for an iPod Touch, and I need like $85 more. If I have some left over I'll DEFINITELY buy this song.
{DJ-HLS}
give me all your monies.... :P
lawls.... kidding. Thats cool... an ipod touch would be awesome.... just get some friends and families to download and all os forgiven..... :P
Thanks for the review.... and ur kicking arse with your music now BTW.
Later!
YOURE BACK!!!
YEZZZ. Awesome song btw. I can't really criticize you on anything cause I don't produce fast techno like this.
{DJ-HLS}
Meh.
You need to work on your buildups and what not. I don't like the clap, it's too loud and doesn't have enough reverb. Put more reverb on it and turn up the decay. It seemed like the buildup was lasting forever too. The song really has no high points or anything to it. It's just like random parts of a song thrown together. Listen to some more Dance music and get some ideas from that.
Also, wheres the bass??? You can't have a Dance song without bass!!! There must be bass!!!!!!! Add bass. And listen to more Dance so you know how to put together the song, and melodies.
{DJ-HLS}
mk, ill try
Not too bad.
Although I don't like the vox or the structure of the song. It's like you went 3 bars and then just went to the chorus which never ended. You shoulda changed it up more, the intro went to long and I didn't like the transitions very much. I also think the hi-hats were EQ'ed way too high in the mid range.
Sorry, but the melody wasn't all that great either. I'll be sure to check out your other stuff.
{DJ-HLS}
Oo a 7, lol definitely the worst score so far xD
Subfreqs...
Are extremely noticable XD. It's havin my sub go crazy right now. Not the kick, but one of your basses. Nice job with this song. Sounds pretty damn good for FL Core. Nice sounds too.
{DJ-HLS}
Age 30, Male
Joined on 6/30/08
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