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[<< Crystal Bass >>]

Meh

First off, I wouldn't call this Trance, because the kick is too hard.

And now to the song. The kick distorts the hi-hat and clap and alota stuff. Also, the main melody seems to be everywhere, and uncontrollable. Try to fix that, and not just have a bunch of random notes it seems like. Try breaking it up rather than having a note every second. Also, don't use extreamly recognizable Sytrus presets like Gold Saw and Platinum Saw and stuff like that. Get Nexus my friend. As well, if your going to use a hard kick like that, at least change the bass to fit the melody. This song seems to be everywhere. I'll go listen to your other songs.

{DJ-HLS}

IndieDance responds:

xD okay =]

but yeh this wasnt one of mi best =]

[<Time to Dance> - Intro]

Nice work!

I like this one better than Dragon Club, this one is better done! I like teh melody alot, but there seem to be some notes off key. Other than that, this is sounding pretty cool. Like the hi-hats too. The bass is also pretty 1337.

{DJ-HLS}

IndieDance responds:

i def like dragon better but both are goona be completed =]

[KKB - Overdose]

Nice job!

Nice pitchbass! This was really really fucking awesome! Love the main lead. It does get a bit repetitive but everything else makes up for it.

{DJ-HLS}

KingKilo responds:

Thanks allot man!
Love your songs by the way. :D

-KKB

[X.-Energize-. Collab]

Nice work you two!

I love the bass and reese type sounds you guys have in there. I also love the main lead. That was pretty sick. Great job you guys!! Nice piano work, XenoxX!

{DJ-HLS}

[Shiskebab FX]

d00d

I think you have a change competing against PX9. No lawls, I'm serious.

You are one god at DnB.

{DJ-HLS}

axeFX responds:

paragon is a respectable artist and I by no means wish to "compete"

[DjCoast-BassPower]

Not bad

I like the cool melody, but I agree, you need better transitions and drums. You also need some better synths. But the melody is what counts and it was pretty cool. Just try making it at least 8 bars. I always make mine 16 bars but that's just me.

{DJ-HLS}

[(EDJ) HardBass]

Not bad but...

There are a few things you could have done better.

1) The kick wasn't hard enough IMO
2) Before you brought in the main melody filter, you should have given a short pause (4 bars)
3) The snare should have been a clap
4) Don't use the standard FL vox, everybody's heard it lol
5) The song itself get's a little repetitive. What I suggest is fading out to a piano "solo" or putting on top of the regular melody the same melody only an octave up. It just keeps people's attention easier.
6) The ending was a little generic

All the criticism aside, I did like the song. Your next song will probably kick ass!!!

Good luck with your next track!

{DJ-HLS}

EnkoreDJ responds:

lol , thx :)
this critism is great and it isnt standard vox. its actually from VEC2 :P
im going to work on improving what you said here in the post :)

[[EDJRMX] Beats n Bass]

Dood...

The intro OWNS MASSIVE PWNAGE!!!!!!! The rest of the song is pretty fucking awesome too. Great fucking job m8!!! Now I'm PUMPED UP!!

{DJ-HLS}

EnkoreDJ responds:

lol thx :D :D
still need to master this though =/ :P

[(Dj-NX) Demo Mix!]

D00D!!

This is 1337!!!!! Awesome mix dude!! Love the Christmas song, I'm actually thinking of doing one my self. But anyways, you are getting really really good at this. Great job!

{DJ-HLS}

NX177 responds:

haha thanks man! XD
i cant wait to release my christmas song. its awesome too. XD

[{425} Invincible]

Wow...

Great song dude!! This is really really cool and epic, as everyone else said. I just suggest not using the Soundgoodizer and start using Fruity Limiter or Maximus.

{DJ-HLS}

Michael425 responds:

yeah, i will give those a try with my next song.

Thanks for the review man.