heartless1298's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Dj Clayface - OutThereSomewere]

Pretty good.

I like the melodies, it's just that you have no real chorus/refrain in the song. The part where every buildup leads to, you just don't have it. If you put a refrain in this song, it will be EPIC!!

Overall, I like the melodies, but it doesn't get epic. And it can't get epic without a refrain.

{DJ-HLS}

[-[Change Is Good]-]

I really like this!

Great work my friend. It sounds like you've really found your style. Awesome job. The bass was very well done, and I liked it a lot. The only thing I didn't like was the Hypersaw, too hard of a saw to fit the song. Shoulda used a more softer saw, like a SuperSaw.

Awesome work though. I really like this song.

{DJ-HLS}

japetheape responds:

Thanks for the review, I'm glad you liked the song. As far a the hyper saw goes this is how I look at it, Since the song felt a little to non-harsh (lol) I added it. Also because it fit the mood of my friend. Once again, thanks I appreciate it NOW I MUST GO EAT PEROGIES OM NOM NOM!

[Brando - December Previews]

I love the last one.

Sound like these will all have pretty good turnouts. I can't wait for the last one, it's gonna be awesome as shit!!!

{DJ-HLS}

Dj-Brand0 responds:

Haha glad you liked it. Was maybe doubting the akon song, but I guess now I will finish it for sure. Most of the songs in the preview are half done with melodies organized. All I need to do is fine touch them. Thanks for the rate and review!

-Cheers Brando

[:KA: Trip Thru Time (Demo)]

NEXUS PRESET!!!!!

That's the first thing I hear when I opened the song, was that Nexus bass preset. I believe it's like Trance Bass 8 or something like that. I know that it is a "Trance Bass".

Anywhosal, nice effects work, I also absolutely love the melody. I might do a remix to this if I feel like it. Sounds like a good Progressive Trance melody.

Anyways, I like that Supersaw that fades in. Really adds more oomph to the song. But I don't like that other Hypersaw that you have in there. It just sounds bad, but that's my personal preference on Hypersaws.

Overall, this is a pretty long demo if you ask me, depending on the length that the actual song will be. I really like the song as a whole, I just didn't like the Trance Bass preset, or the Hypersaw.

Nice work!

{DJ-HLS}

KorpzeAudio responds:

Well I've been having trouble with LOTS of stuff. Like I said my CPU is going crazy, so when editing, its VERY hard to hear the real song, not knowing what sounds good or not until I export it.
I have a hard time finding good bass, I did edit it to make it sound just a little different, but I guess it didn't work (like usual lol).
And about the preset thing, I cant make my own synth with any thing to save my life. And the Hypersaw I used was mainly because I cant slide just any synth from any synthesizer for some reason, it would only let me slide synths that came with the program...
So until I can get all of that fixed, I'm pretty much screwed.
Thanks for the review though. Come back any time :)

[Creative Piano Ep.2]

Not bad.

I like the melodies A LOT!!!! You just need bass and more things to fill up the song, and the fact that the whole song is just piano with a dance back beat, it just looses its splendor after a while. If you wanted to do a Dance song, you shoulda faded into the song with the piano but changed to a SuperSaw or something (SuperSaw would fit best with this song).

Also don't use that kick layout. Very amateur and repetitive. No "Kick, Kick, Kick, KiKiKick". And never use a snare in place of a claps position.

I just have one question for you. Where are you getting all these effects?

{DJ-HLS}

Skylence responds:

my friends. as i told renoak i just have a way of getting around lol =D

[Dancin on _ RR]

Awesome job!

The only problem that I didn't like was the monotone synth. It got quite annoying after a while.

Other than that nice job. SOUPAH SMEXAY REEVUEW!!

{DJ-HLS}

RenoakRhythm responds:

lol..... ya the da da da da da daaa da da da.... lulz..... not happy enough for you? jk

thanks for the sexi review :P

[The Sky Dance]

Wheres the bass?

All I hear is that melody, and a kick, and some effects. Bass, claps, open hi hats, closed hi hates, and a backup melody are all needed.

Keep trying. You are slowly getting better.

{DJ-HLS}

Skylence responds:

whoops must have forgotten the bass lol i kinda just threw it together right after school lol

[Kazmo - Urban Train Core RMX]

Not bad.

The chorus just seemed a little empty, like it was lacking some bass or something. Other than that awesome song!!!

{DJ-HLS}

Kazmo responds:

Thanks for the review! I'll be sure to check out the bass. :D

[Lisa's Song =HFX=]

Wow.

Absolutely amazing. I don't agree with the other guy down there, this song is extremely sad. Great work Melody, you are becoming a true composer. I really don't have much else to say because this song is so good.

Haha, it just looped and I barely realized it XD

{DJ-HLS}

Phyrnna responds:

Yeah, it loops well! :D I didn't really intend on it doing that, but it does so hence it makes a great loop. :3

[So Irresistible Remix =HFX=]

Wow, this was great!

Amazing work Melody!!! I really really love this! Great job making something as great as this outa such shitty sounds. When you can do that then you know that you are truly a GOOD artist.

I think you've inspired me to make one for the contest :P

{DJ-HLS}

Phyrnna responds:

I'm glad that you're making one! I'd love to hear what you come up with! :D

-HFX ^_^