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Meh.

You need a better kick, as well as a clap going along with the kick. Also, the kick is WAY too loud and is distorting everything. Try working on that, cause the melody is pretty good and so is the synth.


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Skylence responds:

ok well thanks and i might work on my jumpstyle so i will try to get better =D

Nice song.

Although I have a few questions.

What VST did you use for the main lead and how did you make it, cause I really want a lead like that (to go from plucking to a saw lead). PM me about it.


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Pyroific responds:

Sylenth 1 is what i used.

Pretty damn amazing.

I don't know how you do it, but this is too epic for words. This pwns ass on pretty much any song I've heard so far. The one problem with it is that the kick is a little airy and weak, if you know what I mean? Try a more fuller, more powerful kick next time. Just a suggestion.

Absolutely stunning work though. Very cool guitar work.


{DJ-HLS}

Nice work.

The "Rock This" was kinda outa place and easily recognizable as FL Core stuff. I like the how you used the entire melody (the chorded one). Most people forget about that, as did I when I made a remix.

I really like this one.


{DJ-HLS}

Awesome job dude!

I love this song, be it your first creation. It gets amazing at 0:56. Nice chorded melody. Awesome work!


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Bleh =/

Still empty. This is not RenoakRythem's fault, as she can't really make the older version of this into an amazing epic Trance song if the original wasn't that good to begin with. You still need a lot to learn my friend, as this song is still extremely empty. The setup of the song isn't very good, and it's extremely repetitive, being that the main lead never ever changes. You still need to fix a lot, and I don't believe that anything more can be done to this song, try starting off scratch and spending A LOT of time on it. Listen to some Basshunter, as that is obviously the kind of music you are trying to make. Get the VST plugin Nexus, as that is an extrememly good VST for the kind of music you are trying to produce, and it's a ROMpler (all presets).

Overall, I didn't really like the song even with Renoak's mastering. Try and try again until you succeed.


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Skylence responds:

its a guy =p

Not bad but...

You really need new synths. And the square main synth gets annoying after awhile.


{DJ-HLS}

Nice work!

Classic XenoxX style and piano work! Nice job with that! The only real problem I have with this song is that the main lead from 2:08 to 2:51 is almost completely distorted the whole time. Other than that, pretty cool song.

Overall, it was entertaining, but simple. Very warm and full though.


{DJ-HLS}

Awesome.

This is a really really fuckin good remix. It actually sounds more like Heavy Metal or Rock compared to Punk. It's got alota Avenged Sevenfold feel to it. Awesome work!

Evil-Dog responds:

Yeah it's true! it's more like soft metal. But the beats are punk but the melodies are more metal.
Thanks for the review :)

Nice job.

Teh bass is distorting though. Nice work though, awesome song.


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