Not bad...
But there were a few things I didn't like.
One thing that I didn't like was the bass synth note that plays when the kick plays. I really didn't like that cause it softens up the song. You're getting soft on me BeatSource!!! You should also use a harder kick. It just seems like everything is getting really soft. You should definitely take away the bassnote that plays when the kick plays, cause if you do that the song would sound so much better.
I'm not sure what else I didn't like. It was a really really good song but that one part that I didn't like pretty much ruined it for me. You take that out and I'll love it so much more.
Since those are all my own personal preferences, you don't have to change anything if everyone else seems to like it. This was by no means a bad song, it was a great song, I just didn't like that one part.
Ok now it seems like I'm starting to ramble on, so I'll finish up. Overall, I thought it was a pretty good song, but too soft.
Keep producing Ethalyn!!
{DJ-HLS}