heartless1298's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Moon Gods]

USE A LIMITER!!!

But it is a pretty good ambient song. Sounds like something from Samus, no lie. Woah dude, I really like that plucky sound.

But, like I said, you need to start mastering your songs. Try using Fruity Limiter on the master channel and play around with the gain and the ceiling. That will help you out.

Maybe even EQ'ing it will help out as well. Ah who am I kidding, EQ'ing always helps out.

Nice song, but it didn't really go anywhere. It just kinda stayed in the same state of mind. I do like your effects btw, they are pretty damn cool.

{DJ-HLS}

Skylence responds:

thanks. i gotta get some help with the whole mastering think. there are things in FL that i dont even know how to run them ; like limiter ,3xOsc and others that are important. could you tell me some places i can find some tutorials?

[BeatSource - Fit 4 Club]

Shweet song!

You finally mastered it perfectly! I really like the intro, but the main saw imo is a little too hard.

Oh damn do I love that melody. I think I'm going to be listening to this over and over again for about an hour. You hooked me!

Great damn song dude. I'm a little too much in shock of how good it is that I can't right a satisfactory review to go along with this amazing song.

Great outro too!

I love pretty much everything about this song. It's just great. Nothing but pure "ace" here, as you say it XD!!

{DJ-HLS}

Ethalyn responds:

Thanks man, im glad you enjoyed pretty much every aspect of it ;) And YESH, i finally got mastering =D

[Hardstylez Demo]

Pretty cool, awesome intro.

Love that intro melody and synth. Was pretty fucking cool.

And yes, there are some mastering issues with this.

Oh damn, I really like that kick!! I like that melody and saw as well, it's really really detuned.

You should definitely finish this one, and master it better, cause it's one awesome one.

{DJ-HLS}

SessileNomad responds:

yeah i didnt spend too much time mastering the first time around

i actualy think the melody is just too simple, i plan on making it more complicated after i finish some more projects

thx for review man

peace

[Yelltek - Last Day [WiP]]

OMG

Holy shit that is one epic as hell pad in the beginning, and the piano just adds.

The transition is amazing as well, awesome fucking melody, btw. I like the saw, as well as the kick this time. The kick for "I'm Sorry" (I think that was it) was a little too soft. This one is more big and distorted, which I like.

I also like how you pitched it to fit the melody. You might want to use a different kick actually, because this one when pitched doesn't sound all too good.

You should take up some ambient songs or something using your extreme talent of making epic intros, and turn them into full length songs, cause that intro is just too epic.

Great song, love it. Can't wait for the final.

{DJ-HLS}

Yelltek responds:

haha, thank you very much xD
yeah, more power now :P
it's the bass that is little fkd so its sound crazy, i'm goin to fix that later :P
lol thanks but i CANT make full length classical songs :o
they always get way to repetevly ;S
anyway thank you very much for the review :D
/Exnotic

[StianK_DagenDerpå_(BeatSource)]

Too loud.

Too loud and is clipping a lot, maybe so loud that it is actually distorting, not just clipping. For once in my life, I'm actually going to say turn down the volume!!

I do love the melody and the vocals though, and that's what held onto me for this song. If it hadn't been for them, I probably wouldn't listen to it because it's, no offense, a bit poorly mastered.

Come on Ethalyn, I know you can do better mastering than this!!!!

Good song overall, but the mastering killed it to a small degree.

{DJ-HLS}

Ethalyn responds:

Thanks, ill practise mastering :)

[Franswa - Teaser two demo]

Really cool short song!

I don't think I dislike anything about this song. All the really simple samples all go together really well for this techno piece.

Great work!

{DJ-HLS}

EternalXIII responds:

ty, there is a longer version of this up on my page, it called this is life demo

[-:YRX:- MMZ2 PowerfullRemix]

Wow.

"RAWR"

Now dis is a really really cool song here. I like that pikey synth you had goin there around 0:41. I also like how you kept it in there and started fading in the kick. I just think you shoulda put some bass in the song and brought it in sooner. That would have made the song soo much fuller.

Really cool song though. Me likie.

{DJ-HLS}

P.S. Nice job wit teh intro. It was teh shitzies. XD

YouriX responds:

Yeah thanks for the comment man. About the bass well i did use the BooBass synth but i guess that whas to soft.

P.S
Thanks for commenting on the intro :)

[{DjF}Finders Keepers]

I agree.

I don't think the fullness is to what it should be. I also see this as more House, not Trance.

I think the backwards kick should stop at around 0:44. After that, it get's old and outa place.

If you fill up the song with more melodies I think this could be much better.

{DJ-HLS}

Dj-Final responds:

cheers. appreciate the review. i'll see what i can do abotu the backwards kick. but this isnt the full song, its still in the works. so i'll post it once its finished. Thx for the review.

[:KA: Psywave (Demo)]

You're an amazing artist.

But the offbeat bass ruins the whole song, and that's why I docked a point. You should really use more Trance bass with this song, cause this is one hell of an epic Trance song. If you want me too I can come up with a bass pattern and a bass preset for this song that goes with it better, cause the offbeat bass just doesn't belong.

Other than that I loved this song. You are one hell of an amazing artist. :)

{DJ-HLS}

KorpzeAudio responds:

Ah! I'm so confused! People say one things good, then others say its bad! xD lol.
Yeah, like I said, its REALLY hard to edit this song, so I'll see what I can do about it.
Thanks for the review tho dude.

[Trance-stravaganza!!!!]

Nice song!

If you don't mind, I'll be taking that melody and making a remix XD. Don't worry, I'll give you credit for the melo.

I don't like the bass very much though. I'll send you a PM when the remix is done!

{DJ-HLS}

chucktownbluv responds:

word.