Lol, Mixcraft.
Haha I used to have Mixcraft, and I know that the loops weren't this bad. You just have all the loops all overtop each other, and not changing the volume levels, which sounds TERRIBLE! One piano loop at a time dude! The ones you have going sound like shit together.
Also, get Fruity Loops. It's much better than that piece of shit software Mixcraft. Fruity Loops is so much better trust me.
{DJ-HLS}
ok......i will see that software but im still noob in music business ...i will recognized that im not expert and im still amateur
Many corrections need to be done.
And it's not Trance. So many people have been putting Dance music under the Trance genre lately.
Anyways, the leads and synths are distorting WAY too much, they are too loud. I don't like that Hypersaw, you should change it to a Supersaw, and you should really fix all of the distortion. The kick is also too loud and is distorting everything. You could also use a better clap.
Lots of work done, and genre correction, but I think this could turn into a pretty cool song.
{DJ-HLS}
K. Anyways its not hypersaw or a saw at all. Thanks for the suggestions though.
I wish I could buy this...
CAUSE I'D LOVE TO!!! But right now I'm saving up for an iPod Touch, and I need like $85 more. If I have some left over I'll DEFINITELY buy this song.
{DJ-HLS}
give me all your monies.... :P
lawls.... kidding. Thats cool... an ipod touch would be awesome.... just get some friends and families to download and all os forgiven..... :P
Thanks for the review.... and ur kicking arse with your music now BTW.
Later!
Meh.
You need to work on your buildups and what not. I don't like the clap, it's too loud and doesn't have enough reverb. Put more reverb on it and turn up the decay. It seemed like the buildup was lasting forever too. The song really has no high points or anything to it. It's just like random parts of a song thrown together. Listen to some more Dance music and get some ideas from that.
Also, wheres the bass??? You can't have a Dance song without bass!!! There must be bass!!!!!!! Add bass. And listen to more Dance so you know how to put together the song, and melodies.
{DJ-HLS}
mk, ill try
Not too bad.
Although I don't like the vox or the structure of the song. It's like you went 3 bars and then just went to the chorus which never ended. You shoulda changed it up more, the intro went to long and I didn't like the transitions very much. I also think the hi-hats were EQ'ed way too high in the mid range.
Sorry, but the melody wasn't all that great either. I'll be sure to check out your other stuff.
{DJ-HLS}
Oo a 7, lol definitely the worst score so far xD
Nice remix!
I just don't like the hypersaw. It's just too hard. Use a softer saw, it will go better with the song.
{DJ-HLS}
The hypersaw? Nah I don't use crappy FL defaults :D It's nexus, Exploration of space I think. Yeah maybe I can make it a bit softer. Thanks, glad you liked it.
Thanks for the rate and review.
-Cheers Brando
Happy New Years!
Nice.
Amazing piano work as usual. Love the detuned saw. I don't like the kick though. It's not near powerful enough. You should use a big distorted one XD
Anyways, I love the melodies and the piano work, but you need a new kick. And since you have no bass, it really does need that big distorted kick. I think the ending is fine by the way.
I think my favorite part of this song was the beginning. In your next hardstyle song you should keep it a classical hardstyle. So instead of the classic detuned saw you have strings and piano and shit. I think it would be epic as hell.
OK now I'm just starting to ramble on.
NICE SONG!!
{DJ-HLS}
thanks, i tried litterally for two hours layering kicks, and i had no luck finding anything
i cuz whenever i tried distorted kicks, it would clash with everything horribly
there is a bass...lol it just matches that little note before each of the main notes in my melo....if that makes sense
lol im going to try and stay in the classical hardstyle, but idk about strings and piano with the heavy kick, BUT i am going to try it
peace out dude thanks for review
Pure epicz sawce
I'm too awestruck right now to know what to say. Too epic for my ears. Gots the beginning of the melody from Edge of Faith.
I'm not a huge fan of the bass either, but the vocals are amazing.
Nice song broskie!!
{DJ-HLS}
Edge of Faith is a remix of Still Alive...lol xD
Thanks man!!! I appreciate the comments! :D
Where do you get these awesome pianos?
Seriously? Where?
Nice DnB song, but the bass shouldn't be offbeat like that. You should use a reese or something. I didn't like the part at :50 up until 1:02 because it just didn't sound right. A little repetitive in parts, but its all good. I still didn't like the bass.
You really do have amazing piano skills my friend. That will take you somewhere someday. You should tell me where you get them awesome pianos XD
{DJ-HLS}
actually the bass was the last thing i put in this cuz like my last song i just didnt have it in the end, i was trying to focus on the piano in this, so i didnt want a bass that stuck out and stole attention, and the first time i wrote it, it actually was onbeat, but it was clashing with the piano worse than ever that way, AND i did try out a reese, but i absolutly hated it with this song, so no reese
thanks for awesome review man, i apreciate it
p.s. the pianos are nexus yo, go to nexus then piano, then...i used power grand or nexus grandpiano in this one, although im not sure, if you were asking where i get my piano 'skills'
i dont really know
peace yo
Not bad.
Not too shabby. I'm not a big fan of the kick, but I'm a huge fan of your piano work. Amazing job with that. But where's the bass????? You can't have a song without bass!!!!! Come on now dude!!! Too empty without that BASS.
Not bad of a song though. Nice with copying the wind thing XD
{DJ-HLS}
lol wow i didnt think about that, i guess i totally forgot about bass in this, god im stupid
thanks for the reality check
peace man
*EDIT*
wow that kick does suk
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